"Anything worth doing is worth doing right."

Blog #18

My revision strategy:

My overall goal is to redirect my essay onto a less broad topic and to clarify my points and quotes so they meld better with my essay.

Steps:

  1. Focus my essay onto the way different cultures see beauty. (Create new points)
  2. Look back through my sources to find better and shorter quotes.
  3. Find out how to properly cite podcasts.
  4. Check for grammatical errors.
  5. Have it peer-read.

My biggest challenges will be to refocus my essay onto a more narrowed topic. My first issue when I wrote this essay was I took to wide of a scope, which made it very difficult to keep my essay from feeling scattered and thoroughly explained. It will also be a challenge to correctly make my work’s cited, since I have never actually cited a podcast before.

If any challenge arises I can always use the English books I have, the internet, and asking my peer’s for their advice. If any challenges arise I can also always change routes to avoid any weird wordings and confusing points.

1 Comment

  1. elishaemerson

    Great! I hope that our conversation helped send you off on a more stable footing.

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