My revision strategy:
My overall goal is to redirect my essay onto a less broad topic and to clarify my points and quotes so they meld better with my essay.
Steps:
- Focus my essay onto the way different cultures see beauty. (Create new points)
- Look back through my sources to find better and shorter quotes.
- Find out how to properly cite podcasts.
- Check for grammatical errors.
- Have it peer-read.
My biggest challenges will be to refocus my essay onto a more narrowed topic. My first issue when I wrote this essay was I took to wide of a scope, which made it very difficult to keep my essay from feeling scattered and thoroughly explained. It will also be a challenge to correctly make my work’s cited, since I have never actually cited a podcast before.
If any challenge arises I can always use the English books I have, the internet, and asking my peer’s for their advice. If any challenges arise I can also always change routes to avoid any weird wordings and confusing points.
Great! I hope that our conversation helped send you off on a more stable footing.